Alec Laine

Definitely worthy of a gold star. This could be a short book for children, and I'm saying that as a compliment. You write in a way which pulls me in, ...

Um, I really like the idea of being able to become any form of life of any time-period. But does it have to be like gods and stuff? Just the ...

Quite honestly the best edition of Star Wars: Episode I that I have ever seen. INCLUDING the movie. No, but really. This was epicness! I'll read the rest too, you ...

Something to note is that isle means island. Aisle is the word you're after. You did that a few times. Thank you for correcting that. One thing that struck me ...

Thank you so much for the star! As you both said, the info dump does seem a bit unprofessional, so I'll change it right away. Thank you again for the ...

Hey Alec. ^_^ I'm just going to make some general suggestions and point out a couple of typos. “Just a few more minutes, mom,” sounded Marcus’s response, muffled trough the ...

Thanks. I am an Australian and we spell realised with an "s" but it can be spelled both ways. I will try to write more and yes, I did repeat ...

I found the plot line very interesting. The conversation seemed a little stiff at first, but as you let us [the readers] glimps into the personallty of the characters I ...

absolutely brilliant, this is the first comment I give to a writer here on YWS. the way you've composed it is absolutely awe-inspiring. I was deeply touched, and strongly suggest ...